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I may or may not actually use this character, but she was my first try at drawing manga with tips from the book Mastering Manga by *markcrilley I didn't go through any specific walk through, but I flipped through the pages for help with face's layout. :D The eyes actually are green, but the scan didn't work out so well. :P Haha, anyway, please give me tips and help, since I'm still learning. ^^

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Very nice! :) I like her expression, and you did a pretty good job on the anatomy of the face. The way you colored her hair looks cool, too. :D One thing that looks a little off is that the left ear and the right eye are too big. A trick to help make sure your drawing is symmetrical is to look at your sketch reversed in a mirror before you color it to check if anything looks off. Also, I like how you colored her bangs, but toward the middle of her hair where her part is it should get darker. Her jaw looks a tiny bit strange, too. I thing it's a little too high up and pointy. Other than that, this looks very good. Keep up the great work! :)
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EricaNJ Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Hey Sun this looks really great! Your drawing is improving steadily!
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Sunbeargirl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you Erica! You're too nice. :heart: I hope you had a blessed Christmas. :meow:
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mikiyell Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
You did a good job with the hair and the balance of the face. The eye brows make it look like she is smiling shyly.
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Sunbeargirl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :glomp: Anything for me to fix?
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mikiyell Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Nothing really pops out to me that needs fixing.
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Sunbeargirl Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks. ^^
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