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The War of the Dragonlings ~ Chapter TwoThe next morning went on as usual, minus the fact that I woke up a little earlier than normal. I took my regular gallivant about the woods for half an hour, then came back to the area of the arena near my sleeping place to practise a bit of my moves before starting to sing random songs for fun ten minutes later. Prior to that, however, I couldn’t resist taking a peek at my necklace. I had placed it in my leather satchel so nobody would see it. Before leaving the Master’s cave the day before, I’d realised how others might feel and took it off right before soaring back down to ground level. It glinted gorgeously.
"I don't wanna gain the whole world, and lose my sou--"
"Oh, Kalshadarlis, could you stop singing for a minute so I can sleep a wink?!"
Iecalshard. He was always so grumpy when he was tired, and morning was no exception. He was usually tired in the morning, no matter how much he slept previously. I was the same, but not today. I had awoken earlier than normal s

The War of the Dragonlings ~ Chapter One"Now, Kalshadarlis will show you one of the most important moves to use when in battle against evil."
I did the move exactly as the Master had taught it to me by leaping into the air, doing a backflip, and kicking out with my hind paws before my forepaws broke my fall. I heard gasps of astonishment as well as whispers of jealousy as I landed on my feet again. The Master always spent most of his time with me, for I was his favourite apprentice- perhaps because we shared scale colour.
All of the dragons my age were his apprentices, but he mainly taught me how to do moves and the like. If he wished it so, he would tell me to show the move to my contemporaries and teach it to them. I had an amazing training experience, but the rest of the dragons were ignored by him most of the time.
There was one dragon of each colour on the colour wheel training from the Master's instruction. Each contrasting coloured dragons spent most of their time together. Flametas was always with Watershan, and

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I may or may not actually use this character, but she was my first try at drawing manga with tips from the book Mastering Manga by *markcrilley I didn't go through any specific walk through, but I flipped through the pages for help with face's layout.

The eyes actually are green, but the scan didn't work out so well.

Haha, anyway, please give me tips and help, since I'm still learning. ^^

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Critique by *WickyW Dec 28, 2012, 5:58:57 PM

Very nice!

I like her expression, and you did a pretty good job on the anatomy of the face. The way you colored her hair looks cool, too.

One thing that looks a little off is that the left ear and the right eye are too big. A trick to help make sure your drawing is symmetrical is to look at your sketch reversed in a mirror before you color it to check if anything looks off. Also, I like how you colored her bangs, but toward the middle of her hair where her part is it should get darker. Her jaw looks a tiny bit strange, too. I thing it's a little too high up and pointy. Other than that, this looks very good. Keep up the great work!

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